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Visual Novels / Re: Tomoyo After (found grammar mistakes?)
« on: September 23, 2012, 05:11:23 am »
There also should be a comma so that the second to last sentence reads, "Right, how about you get a girlfriend, too?"  If I remember my grammar right, "too" always requires commas for seperation when in a sentence.

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